literature

Kill Me

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Literature Text

You brought me back
From my cold grave
Lifted me up
With the promise to save

Just to kill me again....


You gave me life
Let me drink of your blood
Pressed your cold lips
Upon my tainted love

Just to kill me again....


You brought me back home
To all of my friends
Used the dirty towel
To wipe away my sins

Just to kill me again....


You tasted my heart
And spit me back out
Then carressed my soul
When I started to shout

Just to kill me again....


From my deep slumber
You silently awoke me
When I needed to breath
You violently choked me

Just to kill me again...
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That's the most beautiful poetry i ever read. To Me, it describes life about how it sucks and all that. To the others that love there love and all that. It's for all the Sucidal Emos with life's (like me) My favirote part was:

You tasted my heart
And spit me back out
Then carressed my soul
When I started to shout

Just to kill me again....

That really is beautiful.. Telling that how someone you love, loved you, but then hated you again. And telling everyone to kill your self again. I really, love,love, love it! Really! It's beatiful!