cute character ! the simplicity is awsome. the eyes really give it life. i enjoy the shading. the black however i think should be much darker . the hatching and cross hatching does its job but the dimension gets lost when in this case you are using black to show the figure.the shading overall i think is just fine. as far as details go, the neck and sockets for the eyes seem to be lacking with darkness. the last thing i think is that maby the character shouldnt be centered. i think it could be put in the corner of the page -bottom right. but cool idea i really like it.
the simplicity is awsome. the eyes really give it life. i enjoy the shading. the black however i think should be much darker . the hatching and cross hatching does its job but the dimension gets lost when in this case you are using black to show the figure.the shading overall i think is just fine. as far as details go, the neck and sockets for the eyes seem to be lacking with darkness. the last thing i think is that maby the character shouldnt be centered. i think it could be put in the corner of the page -bottom right. but cool idea i really like it.
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Who's to know that your soul will fade at all?
The one you sold to fool the world.
You lost your self-esteem along the way.
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I'm gonna sing the Doom Song!
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Who's to know that your soul will fade at all?
The one you sold to fool the world.
You lost your self-esteem along the way.
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I'm gonna sing the Doom Song!
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The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved - loved for ourselves, or rather, loved in spite of ourselves.
-Victor Hugo
Sometimes you have to forget how you feel, and remember what you deserve.
-Anon.
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Who's to know that your soul will fade at all?
The one you sold to fool the world.
You lost your self-esteem along the way.
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The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved - loved for ourselves, or rather, loved in spite of ourselves.
-Victor Hugo
Sometimes you have to forget how you feel, and remember what you deserve.
-Anon.
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Who's to know that your soul will fade at all?
The one you sold to fool the world.
You lost your self-esteem along the way.
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